From 46a4c9865567da7599881f589851013f750e559d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Jay S. Bryant" Date: Tue, 15 May 2018 15:18:05 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Fix wording and Typos in IRC page While reviewing the IRC content page I found some odd wording and typos. Also I think we should say what 'IRC' stands for. This patch addresses those things. Change-Id: I27060c2ea80dda8e2b20efcc0d5a1e789cd2f872 --- doc/source/common/irc.rst | 17 ++++++++++------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/source/common/irc.rst b/doc/source/common/irc.rst index 1551123..6fba9eb 100644 --- a/doc/source/common/irc.rst +++ b/doc/source/common/irc.rst @@ -10,7 +10,8 @@ IRC What is IRC? ------------ -The OpenStack community uses IRC as its primary chat service. +The OpenStack community uses Internet Relay Chat (IRC) as its primary chat +service. IRC allows you to: @@ -109,7 +110,7 @@ Auto-Login On Connecting To Freenode ------------------------------------ In order to identify yourselves that you own the nick name upon -logging in, you need to tell Hexchat to communicate your password over +logging in, you need to tell Hexchat to communicate your password upon connecting. #. Click **Hexchat** from the menu and then click **Network List**. @@ -132,7 +133,8 @@ A good channel to join right away is the #openstack-dev channel. A lot of people hang around in that channel so come on in and say hello! If there is a specific project you are also interested in working on, feel free to join that one as well and introduce yourself there. Interested in joining more -channels or need to look up what one is called? Look :ref:`irc-channels`. +channels or need to look up what one is called? Check out +:ref:`irc-channels` for more information. It's also important to note that given that the majority of contributors reside in the United States, channels will likely be quieter outside of @@ -187,7 +189,7 @@ Troubleshooting Register Your Nick Name ----------------------- -If all goes well you should be connected and no get any pop ups as +If all goes well you should be connected and not get any pop ups as indicated in the previous step's Troubleshooting section. When you login to the server for the first time with your nickname, it @@ -219,7 +221,7 @@ Auto-Login On Connecting To Freenode ------------------------------------ In order to identify yourselves that you own the nick name upon -logging in, you need to tell Colloquy to communicate our password over +logging in, you need to tell Colloquy to communicate your password upon connecting. #. Going back to your connection window, highlight your Freenode connection and @@ -241,7 +243,8 @@ A good channel to join right away is the #openstack-dev channel. A lot of people hang around in that channel so come on in and say hello! If there is a specific project you are also interested in working on, feel free to join that one as well and introduce yourself there. Interested in joining more -channels or need to look up what one is called? Look :ref:`irc-channels`. +channels or need to look up what one is called? Check out +:ref:`irc-channels` for more information. It's also important to note that given that the majority of contributors reside in the United States, channels will likely be quieter outside of @@ -273,7 +276,7 @@ channels, and archives of meetings. IRC Archives ============ -Most IRC channels are archived, you can read the logs on the +Most IRC channels are archived, you can read the logs on `eavesdrop `__. IRC bots