Edited the mechanics of the wording within the document.

Changed all "we" wording to "you," and altered and rearranged some
wording to help the document flow better when being read.

Change-Id: Idf39eb93666a71e3fda25375080eaae90a23ed52
Signed-off-by: Kyle Schneider <kinnder@gmail.com>
Reviewed-on: http://review.gluster.org/5306
Reviewed-by: Luis Pabon <lpabon@redhat.com>
Tested-by: Luis Pabon <lpabon@redhat.com>
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### Git Review
The tool `git review` is a simple tool to automate interaction with Gerrit.
We recommend using this tool to upload, modify, and query changes in Gerrit.
It is recommended to use this tool to upload, modify, and query changes in Gerrit.
The tool can be installed by running the following command:
~~~
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necessarily keep it up to date. Pip gives one the latest which
often avoids problems with various Gerrit servers.
We now need to setup `git review` to communicate with review.gluster.org.
First, let's determine our `git review` setup by typing:
You now need to setup `git review` to communicate with review.gluster.org.
First, determine your `git review` setup by typing:
~~~
git review -s
~~~
If there is no output, then everything is setup correctly. If the output
contains the string *We don't know where your gerrit is*, then we need
a setup a remote repo with the name `gerrit`. We can inspect the current
contains the string *We don't know where your gerrit is*, then you need to
setup a remote repo with the name `gerrit`. You can inspect the current
remote repo's by typing the following command.
~~~
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[Git Commit Messages][] page in OpenStack.org.
### Uploading to Gerrit
Once you have the changes ready for review, you can submit it to Gerrit
simply by typing:
Once you have the changes ready for review, you can submit it to Gerrit
by typing:
~~~
git review
~~~
After the change is reviewed, most likely you may have to make some
After the change is reviewed, you might have to make some
additional modifications to your change. To continue the work for
a specific change, you can query Gerrit for the change number by
typing: