Fix wording and Typos in IRC page

While reviewing the IRC content page I found some
odd wording and typos.  Also I think we should say
what 'IRC' stands for.  This patch addresses
those things.

Change-Id: I27060c2ea80dda8e2b20efcc0d5a1e789cd2f872
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Jay S. Bryant 2018-05-15 15:18:05 -05:00 committed by Jay Bryant
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@ -10,7 +10,8 @@ IRC
What is IRC?
------------
The OpenStack community uses IRC as its primary chat service.
The OpenStack community uses Internet Relay Chat (IRC) as its primary chat
service.
IRC allows you to:
@ -109,7 +110,7 @@ Auto-Login On Connecting To Freenode
------------------------------------
In order to identify yourselves that you own the nick name upon
logging in, you need to tell Hexchat to communicate your password over
logging in, you need to tell Hexchat to communicate your password
upon connecting.
#. Click **Hexchat** from the menu and then click **Network List**.
@ -132,7 +133,8 @@ A good channel to join right away is the #openstack-dev channel. A lot of
people hang around in that channel so come on in and say hello! If there is
a specific project you are also interested in working on, feel free to join
that one as well and introduce yourself there. Interested in joining more
channels or need to look up what one is called? Look :ref:`irc-channels`.
channels or need to look up what one is called? Check out
:ref:`irc-channels` for more information.
It's also important to note that given that the majority of contributors
reside in the United States, channels will likely be quieter outside of
@ -187,7 +189,7 @@ Troubleshooting
Register Your Nick Name
-----------------------
If all goes well you should be connected and no get any pop ups as
If all goes well you should be connected and not get any pop ups as
indicated in the previous step's Troubleshooting section.
When you login to the server for the first time with your nickname, it
@ -219,7 +221,7 @@ Auto-Login On Connecting To Freenode
------------------------------------
In order to identify yourselves that you own the nick name upon
logging in, you need to tell Colloquy to communicate our password over
logging in, you need to tell Colloquy to communicate your password
upon connecting.
#. Going back to your connection window, highlight your Freenode connection and
@ -241,7 +243,8 @@ A good channel to join right away is the #openstack-dev channel. A lot of
people hang around in that channel so come on in and say hello! If there is
a specific project you are also interested in working on, feel free to join
that one as well and introduce yourself there. Interested in joining more
channels or need to look up what one is called? Look :ref:`irc-channels`.
channels or need to look up what one is called? Check out
:ref:`irc-channels` for more information.
It's also important to note that given that the majority of contributors
reside in the United States, channels will likely be quieter outside of
@ -273,7 +276,7 @@ channels, and archives of meetings.
IRC Archives
============
Most IRC channels are archived, you can read the logs on the
Most IRC channels are archived, you can read the logs on
`eavesdrop <http://eavesdrop.openstack.org/irclogs/>`__.
IRC bots